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oh, and they so gotta get it on soon, cause they are HOT together. mmmm yumminess. so good.

I have enjoyed the story so far. I know what's it like to have my muse leave me when I'm working on a story. I've had to leave it, and work on another story, then come back to it. I would recommend watching the movie a few more times (if you haven't already), to get some more ideas. I agree Fry has got to go. Maybe later in the fic, have one of the creatures begin to attack Harry, and he pulls her to him and it attacks her first...kind of like using her as a shield. Has Harry noticed that Jack (I think that's the name) is actually a girl (bleeding - vampire)? When the ship leaves at the end of the movie, maybe have it go into a kind of time warp...earlier. Not so much into Harry's world...or maybe have Riddick there to defeat Voldemort...again. Could be lots of possibilities if you choose to further the story past the Pitch Black movie. I personally haven't seen the second movie (on my things to do list), so I can't comment on that. Anyway....I'm liking it so far. It's dark but sexy at the same time. Love the parts with Harry and Riddick.
~tas

Go go go ! Go go go ! *shakes pom-pom like a maniac*

Just imagine what would happen if Riddick was with Harry when they meet Vako in Chronicle of Riddick ! *purr*

let harry and riddick run off for a couple of hours. their first time shouldn't be hurried. you could try to follow the plot line in the film a tiny bit but not too much. my advice is just to read fanfics, it gets you imagination going on overdrive. good luck

please let ali live thus is a great story cant wait to read more

u are taking way too long to update this story >_<....Please update??? ^_^

that was mean. very very mean. you're hangin' a lemon infron of my nose, but i cant reach it. *pouting*

loved the chappie. so happy harry's found his mate.

Kill Ali..than Jack can be their only child...on the other hand, two kids mean twice the trouble and twice teh fun...hehehe

Just found your story, and enjoyed it very much :)
Harry and Riddick really are perfect together. Can

ch 8: A few spelling and grammar issues, and a little choppy in places, but over all its interesting to read. Congrats.