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person AliceMina

schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Very cool! I really liked it.

person Annie

schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

That was so unbeleivably adorable! I loved how they decided to start all over again.

*glomps you madly*

person Kireania

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I'm going to be mimicking thrnebrook(sp?) and ask for more maybe just one more chapter because its that good. lol i love this and can't wait to go read your other fics.

well gotta go read now

Ja ne
Kireania

person Remetan

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic! Simply marvelous!

I have one bit of advice, though I think it is a bit more about silly html format limitations on this site rather than your writing. It might be easier to differentiate the characters' narratives at first glance if you can find a way to write them in different fonts. It becomes clear a sentence or two into each change, so it's not that big of a deal. Just a thought.

But other than that, wonderful tale!

person Jien

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

mmmmm, delightfully tempting to make you add a sequel but it's very wonderful to leave it as is =^.^=

person Star55

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Aww, that was brilliant!! I would say "MORE" but you did point out that it was a one-shot. This was very well written though =)

It kept me guessing and left me completely satisfied at the end. Well done =)

~*Star*~

person thrnbrooke

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I can't help it if I want more! There should be no such things as one shots or short stories! The good ones always make me want more. Sooo... to quote myself..."I've gotta have more!!!"

person RDWind

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I very much enjoyed this story -- please know that you made someone smile very early in the morning!

--RD

person methoslover

schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Any chance of writing a chapter two?

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