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for Why Did You Do It?

by shelagh

person Persy
schedule May 23, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Simply beautiful!!!!

schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like!!!! I had no idea there was another HP fanfic writer at work. LOL. I'm slowly reloading all my stories here after having my fanfiction.net account deleted.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You got skillz, kid. That was some very decent writing, and a sweet little oneshot to boot. Nice. :)

(I never know what to say in these reviews, but I hate not leaving them...)
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
person Criosdan
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great. Please give us more.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I honestly felt you could have developed the plot with this a bit more. There were places where I really wanted some sensory detail. However, for a one shot, it will do.
person cherry1
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story, if possible can we have a two-parter. thanks