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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg update!! this story is really different u really should continue!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write a sequel, this story is so good!!!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, not only because of Abraxas himself but you have a completed plot line. I sincerly hope that you write more about this little family, however dysfunctional it may be.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was an unusual one-shot, what with the preoccupation with breast milk. I'm assuming that for some reason, both Hermione and Snape's slave are somehow 'addictive' to their owners? And like father, like son - except in the particular part of their slaves' anatomy they're addicted to?
Aside from that, I can't imagine Lucius losing out to the tantrums of a three-year-old, nor Snape to his child. They have slaves that they treat like dirt, but they have no control over their children. Oh dear, that sounds like real life. Wait til Abraxas is a teenager. Lucius had better watch his back. 8-)
Aside from that, I can't imagine Lucius losing out to the tantrums of a three-year-old, nor Snape to his child. They have slaves that they treat like dirt, but they have no control over their children. Oh dear, that sounds like real life. Wait til Abraxas is a teenager. Lucius had better watch his back. 8-)
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I totally didn't expect for Hermione to be the slave/mommy in this story! Seeing that Abraxas was Lucius's father, I was confused at the timing, but I believe it added to the impact when you discover the parentage of little Abraxas. Excellent job!