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Although I agree that Ron is not right for Hermione I can't see him really reacting like that, love potion or not. Because R/Hr is the way Rowling seems to be going it's a great temptation for a writer who supports another ship to turn Ron into a villian. But that's an easy way out that does not do justice to either character.

And I really don't like the plot device of Harry or Snape or whoever coming to Hermione's rescue. I'd much rather see her defend herself. Sorry, but I don't think this story is really my cup of tea

i like this story!
update soon!

Interesting...I don't know that the dream sequence really works there. It was very cliche to go into a dream sequence that raunchy and you could feel it coming from the moment she appeared in the teddy. If you wanted to make the dream sequence more conducive to the story don't have him bolt out of bed. Just go into the dream from her standing in his chambers in the teddy, and then roll into it. He can bolt upright at the end of the dream and hear the knock if he likes as it stirs him from his reverie, I think that would flow better. but what do I know. Heh. Good job thus far. I'd like to see more.

good start!
cant wait to see more.

Hahahahaha I just arrrrrrged and threw my fist at the computer as if im about to punch it, I hate cliffes, especially when your expecting another chapter! XD

and we're off to a wonderful start! subtle missing ingredients hint! lol....

Great start! I'm looking forward to find out where this is going.

I enjoyed the academic discussion between the intern and the professor. I would use spell check before submitting the next chapter. You also might want to capitalize Wolfsbane Potion because it's a proper noun. I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop.

Interesting start. I like the fact that you haven't made them hate each other to begin with!

Thanks, I really hope that more people start reading and giving me more reviews