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I like flies in the ointment.

I would like Hermione to be captured by this Adicus' guy personally. I think that it would add that drama and continue the angsty UST you've got here.

Also, Severus could enlist Harry's help... (without telling him that he and Hermione are becoming close) and it might do to help Ron grow up to.

I like Ron as well, so I hope there is someone you have in mind for him... like Luna?

In my personal opinion Hermione should kick Adicus' ass brutally. Maybe he'd escape but she'd curse his jumk off first. (Sevvy should show up all knight-in-tarnished-armor just in time to see that) That'd be awesome.... Hermione wouldn't get thrown into the generic damsel in distress category (which is so not her) and Sevvy would get to step back and say "whoa". Great so far, keep it up. Thanks much.

(I now say Sevvy just because JK hates it. Darn her for not seeing that Hermione and Severus belong together.)

i love this story- and i dont know what you should do, but im sure whatever you do will be great!

Hmm, let's be traditional and have Snape come to her rescue. Granted she can take care of herself, but this way should Adicus manage to escape and tell the others, then they'll both have to watch their a**es!

hermione should kick Adicus' ass and make her 'admirer' come out into the open. can i have a guess on who it is i think it is eather victor or draco.

Oh ho! Ron's a git! We knew that all along, but I can't imagine him raping Hermione... possibly forcing his lips on hers *fights off images!* but hey, it gives him that darker edge which I do like.

Great story, can't wait for more.

Interesting plot twist. Hooray for Harry punching Ron.

Good chappie! I was so happy to see it up this morning! I truly enjoyed it, even if I hate that Ron is being such a git! (I kind of like the guy myself, even if I have him being a turkey in one of my stories as well) I hope that whatever is going on with him won't be perminent. I can't wait to see where Hermione and Severus take their newfound attraction!

Thanks for updating so fast!

SD

Don't you think that in the few hours Hermione was talking to Snape that it's rather odd for her to have gone from this, in Ch 1:
"Now, now Hermione....You are no longer my student. I'm going to insist that you either call me Minerva or Minnie...All my friends and colleagues do." the older woman said gently."

To this, in Ch 2:
Hermione huffed for a moment. "You heard what I said you old cat! You just want to hear me say it louder!"

I don't care how flustered that Hermione might have been, in a few hours time, she wouldn't go from referring to McGonagall as 'Headmistress' to 'you old cat'!!!

oohh boy!! i love it.. and what an ass ron is.
thank the lord severus was there to save the day..
(even if it was the gates)
and now hermione knows that severus is planning on courting her!! yayy!!!
update soon please!!