rate_review Reviews

Is Hollingsworth really the twin sister? You never through the first four chapters that I just read ever refer to Holly as he or him. You refer several times to his slight statur, small hands and smooth cheeks. It has to be a woman. (Also the fact that it is in the Snape/OFC catagory kind of gives it away.) At first, I thought maybe you put it in the wrong catagory, and I was going to stop reading, because I don't like slash, but then I picked up on the never he or hims. You did a very good job of that. I will be watching for updates.