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for Angel on the cover

by cdraco

person Jicky
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww only 2 memories? i am anxious to see more of Harry's memories and their meaning to him!
oooh n what in the world did Draco buy from a corner store!?
medium cliffhangers!!
this story so far is progressing quite nicely, but it seems the chapters are over too soon.
then i await the 13th installment.
cheers~
person Jicky
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg what a great story. it was a bit vague in the beginning.
but the ch10 really picked up the pace and my interest/need for the rest of the story.
i believe i have the reason to what the vision Harry seen really is. Draco giving birth.
if this is ur 1st story, which i think u wrote it somewhere, it's been a great job so far.
i like the angsty feeling btwn Draco and Harry, it's sad but wonderful.
i like the spacing u've used, BUT the chapters coudl be longer thou!!
i really look forward to reading more.
person cerichan
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is great!
I read it till 3 in the morning (and I had work the day after!)
I hope for a bit of reconciliation sex now....;P
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so need chapter 12! Will Harry allow them to see the vision?
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6! Why did Harry leave? Why write out a statement like that?
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this sounds promising. must go and read more. cheers!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. its so sad and im in tears (damn those hormones. its that time of the month). must read more, cheers!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch3:

thats it mione. be stubborn as always and dont give up.

excellent job. im really enjoying this.cheers
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 6: loved thsi chapter to bits. and i definiately agree that draco would not ome quietly. Ron was so...Ron in this chapter. gret job, cheers!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch9:

harry, you'll never learn tact *head-palm*. great chapter as always, cheers!