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for A New Toy

by ccrawley

schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in this story i think it will be full of fun, looking forward to the next update, which i hope might be soon
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely fun to read
person DB1
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@3. cool story, poor hermione though.

*DB*
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! I hope Hermione kicks some photographers butt! Little terd! Although, I look forward to seeing what Lucius does when he sees the magazine. And of course How will Hermione react to it all? I'm sure she'll be livid! And what about when Harry and Ron see it? OMG!!!

LOL,
SD
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know which is worse "remembering that she was forgetting something" or "the press of her large breast pressing" Get a bloody beta!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-3: I haven't read a story with a Polyjuice prostitute before so I think that was a terrific idea. It makes so much sense. Now all I need is some hair off Lucius' head (snerk).

The idea of Hermione Granger being photographed naked and put on the cover of the magazine was great! And Snape's reaction! Draco and Blaise didn't waste any time using the pics for their own edification. Blaise is the kinkier of the two - odd - I might have voted for Draco, being his father's son and all. But Blaise did himself proud.

I can't wait to read who else reacts to those pics. Since you've put this in the Lucius/Hermione section I certainly hope Lucius Malfoy reads Play Wizard. AND how will poor Hermione react to all this? She'll have every horny young (and old) man after her now. Can she sue Colin for invasion of privacy and selling those pics without her permission? I hope she strings him up by his gonads.

Waiting for the next chapter. What next???
person crinna
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very good i can't wait to read more. i love the little snake tattoo