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for A New Toy

by ccrawley

person dragon37
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. I keep looking for a story to where Hermione is dominate over Lucius, and now I think I've found one, I hope. She just reminds me of someone who could be a dominate person, even with strong men like Lucius.
person DB1
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@7. go hermione! why do the malfoys have house elves named after muggle drinks????? great chapter, update soon

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person 999
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha You are so wicked! What is Hermione going to do to Lucius now that she has control! I love this turn of events. I think it is time for a little payback...eh?
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter enjoyed reading it very much, looking forward to next chapter
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: So Hermione uses Lucius for her own enjoyment. I like it! And NOT his enjoyment. Even better. Wow, after installing all those wards and unplottable devices, will she let Lucius have the run of the villa? Or is he going to be tied to that bed for the next few chapters? How will she void his powers? He must have quite an arsenal of verbal and nonverbal spells without needing a wand, being as accomplished a wizard as he is. Silencing him would only control the verbal spells and besides, I want to hear him bitch and moan about his incarceration (evil me). did she ward the villa against any and all of his spellcasting? I can't remember.

Hey, just don't let Banger use Lucius'...ahem...you know...as a scratching post. Okay?

So the battle lines are drawn. Lucius asked for it and I hope Hermione delivers his comeuppance in spades. Got any kinky stuff in mind? Just wondering... 8-)
person misslala
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Hermione screwed him tied up that's great!!!! DENY HIM! What a pratt!
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what is Hermione planning to do with her new Malfoy toy!

Wonder if Draco will come looking for his father. What a surprise he will get, and maybe Hermione will add Draco to her Malfoy toy collection.

I like that Hermione is the one in charge, from the title I thought that she would be the Toy.

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person 999
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Lucius certainly had his way with her didn't he! I suppose wooing her was out of the question. Now I'm curious to see Hermione's reaction when she comes to. Is Lucius planning on keeping her? Please update soon!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know quite how to put this, this story is....horrifically awesome. Very creative, certainly. Please keep updating. I enjoy reading it.
person DB1
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6, great chpater, update soon

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