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Excellent story I love evil Snape and I love evil Lucius together oh my it's just too much I can't stand it!!!! I love it!!!! Can't wait for more.

Oh please when are you gonna update. I'm looking every day and still nothing. sob. Eagerly waiting.
ccino

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Malfoy, your a b#####d. Can't perform well without a spell. You too Snape, I hope you're gonna heal her. And they wanna bring Voldemort back, they're bloody insane. Just out of curiosity, the original contract. Malfoy said it was worthless, how so? He signed, it so what makes it null and void?
Please, not so long between chapters, it's torture.
ccino

Chapter 10: You said, "I make him do something nasty to Maya later..." I thought he'd been doing that all along, so is this nasty thing going to be really bad? I'm going to put on dark glasses when I read that part so it's not so traumatic.

So Voldie is a daddy, or was a daddy. And they're going to bring back daddy dearest? How is Maya involved in this, I wonder. And maybe Voldie is going to be angry that those two have been defiling his daughter. Poor Maya - reamed out physically and now emotionally. If Maya is the daughter, why did Lucius keep Hermione for a year and a half? If they were purely prurient reasons, tell ALL.

And Gaps if you want Lucius to win and I want Maya to win, they both win, don't they? (I'm sure there is some lemon logic in there somewhere...)

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Chapter 9: Hermione's incarceration will be over, and she'll not remember a thing, so Maya won't have a champion to help her. WHY does that wizard duo need to keep a witch in a cell for one and a half years? Just for kicks? they seem able to grab any female who takes their fancy with no trouble, so why put one in a cell? That takes effort: cell cleaning, feeding the prisoner, keeping the cell a secret - going to that unpleasant place at all seems over the top to me.

So, the mystery deepens. Is it Maya they need, or would any female do? But for what? Hmm, guess I'll find out in a chapter or so...Are there by chance any lemons coming our way? 'Lemony Lucius' just has a nice ring to it. 8-)

Chapter 8: Well, I'm stumped. Was Maya the victim of a spell, or wasn't she? Thinking out loud here -- Lucius has every reason to lie to Maya to humiliate her so she thinks she reacted to them merely with her own libido. But then again, he could be telling the truth. However, that would mean she subconsciously enjoyed being basically raped, and with such a strong-minded witch, I would find that harder to believe. No, my guess is he is merely trying to rattle her into thinking she likes it with him and Snape. That would be a mind game Lucius would certainly be capable of playing, as nasty a person as he is.

That's my guess and I'm sticking to it. Therefore, Score: Maya - 1, Lucius (and Snape) - 0

On with the battle! Who will win? [My money's on Maya -- 8-)]

Malfoy's a sneaky git. Pretending they cast a spell. That's if he was telling the truth. He's just given Maya a clue how to make him give up on her though. If she just stops fighting, he's gonna get bored and give up. Isn't he? Maybe. There again, he's had Hermione for one and a half years. Who wouldn't give up? Less time between postings. It's agony waiting to find out what's happening next. :D
ccino

I really didn