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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

person magpie79
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, you are amazing. really great last few chapters, cant wait for the next ones
xx
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! So there shall be a baby seversky eh? Awesome! I of course saw it coming, but I did not see the child making it through the ordeal :D Hell lets be honest I wasnt sure Sky would make it! But she did! I'm so happy :D thanks for the abrupt posting :D I was honestly scared for awhile :D
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, somehow I knew you couldn't do that to us just yet anyway :D I thought Sal would know how to save her, I sat here thinking NO take her to SAL! He can fix it! lol. :D
person Katha
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"She will die at home"?!? I certainly hope not xD because this fic should be much much longer ;).. This is my favourite story!! I love how you draw Severus... an ass on the outside but we all know inside he is a little different ;)...Hope to read more soon!
person misslala
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, even if sad, tense and OMG I can't wait until we find out if SKy lives, which she better after all that :P I like the way you described the ritual, it seemed so very appropriate really. the lines of blood were brilliant and reminds me of the meridians for energy conduction within the body. Chakra's and all that :) Though, it is not totally outlandish that magic that is barely used would be older and what pagans, real pagans use, hehehe Anyway, this is brilliant!!! :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CH. 38 - I am not going to call you names. This chapter brought tears to my eyes. It was very hard to read - was it as hard to write?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Please don't let her die. I want to know if she's pregnant or not. I really would like to see the Father side of Severus. Please, please, PLEASE, don't let her die. Please?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW CAN YOU BLOODY DO THIS TO ME?! cough cough.. err I mean "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Ok hurry up i need to see her live.. damnit she has to!
person Miepje
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*ack* Yes, that was very upsetting! Please tell me that's not the end of Sky and the story!? *whimpers* Don't leave us hanging too long, please. ~Miepje
person misslala
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no!!! Not Sky!!!! NOOOOOO and she was pregnant too! I wont call you names, I assume you have a plan to either end the story or send us through the chams of angst before things get better! ARGH!!! I don't want sky to die!!! UPDATE SOON!