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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a tear-jerker of a start
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it already so I know this story is going to be good Please update sooon,
person Miepje
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning. But what horrible way to live (if you can call that living). Thank gods Severus found "the rags". Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Great to see a new story! ~Miepje
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, how sad. So many questions. Who is the rags, how did they get there, who put them there, why did they beat the rags, why did they suddenly abandon the rags, and if Dumbledore knew they were there, why did he wait till now to save them. I'm sure you will reaveal all of this with time, but you know me, I feel compelled to ask. Good thing Severus kept looking. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for letting me know it was posted!
Sansa