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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say one of my favorite parts of this story so far are your descriptives that you have Severus say about Dumbledore and Harry Potter. They are just too funny! I hope you continue it through out the story.
Sansa
Sansa
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.B.U.N.S. To you and your bunny!
(Plot Bunny Ultra Nutritious Snacks : silent 'p')
This story is wonderful. Sad, sick and silly, but wonderfuly written as always.
I think you have Canon-Snape down to a art.
I can hardly wait to find out who Sky is and why her life was like that.
Sky dancer
(Plot Bunny Ultra Nutritious Snacks : silent 'p')
This story is wonderful. Sad, sick and silly, but wonderfuly written as always.
I think you have Canon-Snape down to a art.
I can hardly wait to find out who Sky is and why her life was like that.
Sky dancer
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God! that was so sad but really funny too I like this story please update soon luv,
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly interesting story so far. I am looking forward to more. Please update soon.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter always like seeing Snapes softer side even if he can't admit it to himself that he is starting to care for the child not to sure about the physical atraction bit but the story wouldn't be the same without it hope to see more soon.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So there's a girl under all those rags. I wonder what's up with that stone/necklace and how Albus knew Severus would find someone there (although Sky is clearly not a boy like Albus thought ^^).
But no more hitting the new girl! *tsk* Severus can have such a temper ^^
Looking forward to more! ~Miepje
But no more hitting the new girl! *tsk* Severus can have such a temper ^^
Looking forward to more! ~Miepje
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh geez...I really, really hope who ever did this to her gets stuck in a room with Snape for a minute..or two.
Sky
Sky
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay first of I am sorry but I just HAD to review this before I really started it. I just love your chapter Rags and how you refer to the person as rags as if he/she is a non-entity. I've never really read anything put that way and I read a lot maybe I just having been paying attention lol. Anywho, I thought that was beautifully done and original. Okay I am done with my rambling.... on to finish your story.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a very intrigueing beginning so far and I'm looking forward to more! Can't say much more at the moment because the OC and her cirumstances/function is still such a complete mystery...
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know that no one comes when you cry, but I just want to cry for this poor girl. What an awful life she must have led. It just makes me cringe to imagine her wounds. Guess Albus is way wrong thinking she is a boy. What's up with the necklace? I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Sansa
Sansa