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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sky! She has to learn to speak properly, how to take care of herself... everything! And then she get's thrown out just like that?! I really feel bad for her, but I'm happy that Salazar will be her family now.

A wonderful, unique story! Looking forward to more. ~Miepje
person misslala
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you just threw more for a complete loop. I like it!!! Keep it coming. Oh how I appreciate the suspense you are building by Albus being Ablus and only revealing what is needed at the time. poor Sky...I can't wait to read more!
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure you are sick of hearing this, but Snape is still a bastard. I don't care if he had his spit second of remorse, he still threw her out. I can't beleive how Dumbledore acted either. Guess he is sorry now. Got to go back and read about the wand, cause I can't quite remember the details about it. Who's eyes? Is it good for her to be influenced by Salazar? Wasn't he kind of evil? Maybe the portrait is from when he was still good. Guess we will find out. Is the rat bastard going to have to find her again? Are you going to make me like him later in the story? Can't wait to read more.
Sansa
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God! that was so fucking sad I couldn't read the chappy because I just couldn't stop crying God! your good, More update's sooon please pleaseeeseas today.
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus is still a bastard. It is a good thing injuries are easily healed in the wizarding world, otherwise he would be in jail for child abuse. That poor little girl just trying to help him, and he breaks her bones. I can't even feel bad that Voldie tourtured him. It seems Sky's stone neclace and bone wand seem to work together, and give her some kind of natural magic that she doesn't even have to learn how to do. I am glad that the rest of the staff is back, and that they are kind to Sky. I know that they gave her her own room, but when the students return, will they sort her into a house?
Sansa
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful chapter (5) and I could just see Snape rolling his eyes before rdering Sky's meal. lol

Skydancer
person misslala
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!! I want more! I am completely raptured by this story.
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape is such a mean bastard! Can't wait to see what is up with the stone and the wand.

Sansa
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now you know I'm here. Snape's such a meanie. Love it!
person misslala
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another stunning chapter! Can't wait for more! Sanpe is such a git! But, when do they get to have sex? :P