rate_review Reviews

Way to go Sky! Crucio the snake-man!!! It's a shame Voldie didn't have his mum or a girlfriend... he'd know not to mess with a woman if he only had a well-rounded education. Being the 'boss' all the time is limiting.

Oh dear! I can think of awful things that Voldemort could have done to or with Godric's sword while he had it!! Would someone have the foresight to check the sword for any dark magic before just putting it back where it usually stays at Hogwarts!

Great chapter!
It looks like Voldemort won't go down without a fight after all...

*phew* I'm glad they've destroyed all the horcruxes. But now Voldie has the sword; that can't be good. Looking forward to his (hopefully painful and messy) death ;)

I'm not neglecting the story, but it's hard to read other stuff and write at the same time. :/ I don't want to steal ideas by accident. But I will get caught up one of these days, LOL) I swear you will be finished by the time I get around to finishing my own epic! LOL

Hope you are doing well. :) And don't let people get you down. Just keep plugging away. :)

Hi,

I just discovered your story and I've spent several days reading it through up to chapter 62. I can honestly say I've never really liked stories with OFC's that much, but your story is truly amazing and of a very high level! I'm totally hooked and I will read it till the last chapter (I hope that last chapter won't be too soon though). Your story has both brought laughter and tears, it has a very fine humor but also sad and touching chapters. I simply love it.

I absolutely love Sky's 'door trick'. Too bad JKR didn't think it up! To have created a magical world and then limit the magic in it was rather short-sighted. If one can transfigure things, why did the Weasley's have crap clothing and a haphazard house? Never made any sense to me. Sky's door thing shows wonderful imagination;) [Of course I also love her taking the wands right out of Voldie's hand!]

Well, reading this amazing story so far: the plot is by far the most interesting i've read in quite a while(and I read A LOT), it'd actually make a good book on its own if the characters were original [too bad J.K. beat you to it, eh ;) ]. I just keep wondering how Sky could be very naive one day (e.g.when she was raped by the evil professor) and super wise the next day(getting voldemorts genitals :]]]]]] or making new potions!? It's also really disturbing to read how a man could comntrol a woman by just saying NO.The vows you made Sky take were really evil.It's just so disgusting that Sevvie-poo just orders her around and then expects to get laid 24-7.MEN!!!!! :P Anyway keep the good stuff comin and please tell us how many chapters will there approximately be in total.

I SOOO love your story! :D please update quickly :D I need to know what happens next like I need my next glass of tea or smoke :D

I'm really sorry to say, but as much as I enjoyed it at the beginning, I am gradually losing interest in reading this story further. I can only enjoy a story if the characters in it are rendered as at least remotely realistic and believable, but what you are doing with your main character is just going out of spin. From battered, illiterate mute to super-witch with a perfect knowledge of Latin, super-lover, super-painter and super-birthing machine... wishful thinking and self-insertion is nice, but not to a point where it destroys the reader's willingness to suspend their disbelief altogether. This is not meant to be a flame but constructive criticism. I know that you can do what you wish with your story, I am just explaining why it no longer works for me as a reader.