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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

person misslala
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! This just keeps getting better and better. She burnt VOLDEMORT!!!!!!! GO SKY! What a great character! I love this, its awsome. PLEASE keep updating regularly.
person Marbil
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It gets more interesting as it goes along. There was a place or two that I didn't find logical, but all in all it's was an interesting read and has hooked me into wanting more.

I noticed a couple of places that need fixing, but I'm too tired now to go ack and find them. You and pittiwitch should read this through again and I'm sure you will find them and fix them. I checked the last few chapters of her story for her, so she knows who I am.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Can't wait for the next Chapter I hope another one today Please.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks' for the new update that was a cool chappy, can't wait too read more I hope today or soon.
person Miepje
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lol* That was so funny; Sky shouting "bollocks" trough the wall at Severus. I love the way she is just too fast for them and is able to outrun them and disappear into the wall. Must be very frustrating for Severus *grin*

Great chapters so far and you've already written 48 of them?! Lucky us! ~Miepje
person Miepje
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No no no! You can't just end it there! Well, you can 'cause you're the author, but that's one evil cliffie.
Poor Severus; all confused and angry bacause of his feelings for Sky. *grin*
I'm glad everything went well with that scary Original. And that Shannon sounds pretty scary too! ^^

Thanks for the update! ~Miepje
person misslala
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was mean...a cliff hanger...my god. LOL Poor sky...poor Severus...I can't wait for more!!!!!
person misslala
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9: Holy cow! Ok that was just too funny when ole Severus was trying to chase her and she was calling him names. LOL Too bad he's so much of a git that he can't see what they have. Albus...he's being himself, he knows more than he lets on...bah! I love it. Can't wait for more.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a happy and a funny Chapter I loved it, So what did she wish for I can't wait to fine out I hope too see more update's soon'.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
visualizing Sky shouting "bollocks" through the wall to Snape will keep me in giggles for a while! Thanks! ( and Albus' giggle-fit too of course)