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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Sky went back to Hogwarts. I am also glad that her and Severus have admitted their feelings to each other. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
Sansa
person misslala
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! This just keeps getting better. Severus embarassed? Holy shit! This is such a cool story and I thank you for writing it. I understand drawing out the tension and all, but man they are just too cute together now. LOL I love this story...Sky watching him masturbate...WOW...lol That's kinda hot. And then him bidding her goodnight, RAWR! *Love is in the air* hopefully she doesn't die...now all I worry about is her dying at Voldemort's hands...:( Then she and Severus won't be together...you wouldn't do that would you? No...you can't, not after building them up so much...hrmmm....authors really are evil, LOL

Please keep going, I look forward to the updates for this thing every day!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter! nice transition from the Snarky to the (dare I day it..? ) Sexy Snape. love the 'jammies at the end lol...
person Katha
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it :) ... I always wanted to read a story like that.. an now... *pling* here it is :) .. Keep it up and update soon!
person misslala
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit~ That was awesome. go sky! hahaha She's too sweet even if she is angry wtih sir. :O You have a brilliant story - keep it up!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! chappy sad but I loved it, And I love that song I can't wait for the next update.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another amazing part to an already amazing story!!!!

schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, now what's she going to do? Talk to them? Are the founders going to reveal everything to her before she leaves? Might it change her mind about going to Hogwarts? Might her feelings for Severus sway her some? Since she healed Snape a few more times, obviously he was called to Voldie a few more times. Why did he let him live after the humiliation that Sky caused? Keep up the good story.
Sansa
person Miepje
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sky kicked some Voldie-butt! She did great, even though she needed healing afterwards. It was also great to see that Sky had more confidence when she talked with Albus and that Severus and Sky are slowly getting a bit closer.

Wonderful as always. Thanks! ~Miepje
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you left us at that point! I wanted more! I wanted to know what happens when she wakes up. I was enthralled with that chapter. Voldie and his followers got theirs. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Sansa