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Well, I'll be damned! Severus is actually being a good boy. Albus has been chastised -- he he! **sniff, sniff** What's that fresh citrus scent? Is that a lemon I smell? Apryl 8D

BUGGER it's over already!!!!! Argh! And how I was so looking forward to a longer chapter. haha I keep getting engrossed over and over again you are a great writer and this is a wonderful story! I hope your writers block wanes, I would love to see this story finish unlike so many that wind up on this site. Sky and Severus both deserve a level of happiness the way you have written this tale.

I am glad Severus restrained himself from reading Sky's diary, that would have been invasive and if he cared about her he wouldn't do that...I still get a kick out of her reactions when he is aroused. I can't think of anymore things to throw you a loop right now but Voldemort better get his due nad Ablus, curse his damn meddling. Always doing things to hurt others - even if he doesn't mean to. Anyway, keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

wondered if the mirror-looking had "voice" Lol...poor Albus...caught off-guard by that!

I am really enjoying this story and eagerly await your next Chapter !

So, what did Albus do to make her so angry? So glad Severus is on the mend and almost himself. He has found himself in quite a tresure trove of new/old information. Glad he put her diary down. I don't think she would have taken that very well. I really didn't want that chapter to end! More, more more.
Sansa

ewwwwwww...death from gangrene? *shudder* that is deserving of the Fourth unforgivable.
I did have a softening for Albus when he admitted his faults (albit only to himself...)
chocolate covered P.B.U.N.S for you!!

I hope that idea doesn't entail sky dead...I am such a romantic I want a happy ending to this story. LOL Poor girl has been through enough. I actually am going to have to go back a chapter ot two to find the section about Why Severus couldn't go in because it seems I ahve forgotten!!!! NOOO....lol

Something has to give, poor sky is dealing with so much for her feelings and Severus...he's going to be lost if he keeps dealing with so much. its not fair, LOL Albus of course is being his usual self which I have come to have a serious love/hate relationship for the headmaster. bleh. You are awesome and have me thorolgly wanting more...its like a drug now. I take my husband to work so we can juggle our one car and then come home and hope to read the next insallment, LOL You rock!!

A very original story. I am up to Chapter 14 and look forward to more. You write very well.

"Tingly?" I loved that part! And Severus (in pyjamas ^^) being watched by Sky and telling her goodnight was funny and sweet.
Death from gangrene; what a nasty curse! Thank gods Sky was able to get to Severus on time and heal him; it wouldn't have been as much fun without him, right?

Looking forward to more! (I just hope you're not TOO evil at the end *sob*) ~Miepje

Wow, I really didn't want that one to end. I wanted see what happened when Severus wakes up. You finally make me like him in this story, then you almost kill him! Voldie thinks he is dead now, right? So he won't have to answer the dark mark if it is activated again, right? It is a good thing that Sky knew what was wrong with him, and remembered how to cure it. The eyes rolled back in his head was kinda creepy. Actually, the whole curse was kind of creepy. No wonder it is the 4th unforgivable. Gangarene, ICK! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Sansa