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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lol* The students thinking Severus has Sky drugged and locked away in his dungeons. And Sky glowing; that was quite a surprise! Now what will Kali(!) say? Looking forward to that. ~Miepje
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad Sky lived trough her trip to and from the great hall. Now I gotta know what the elf is going to say! Kind of funny how one little smile could make all those girls hot for teacher. Snape's not gonna like that. He's got a rep to protect. Kali? Favorite name of yours? Write quick!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So my whining worked! Now I just need to know what is up with the elf. Was Effy maybe conected to her life before Sky was locked in her basement prison? Bring on the next chapter!
Sansa
person misslala
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch: 20 - Elves? House elves huh? *me wonders what's up with that* Whee...it's got me waiting and wanting more! :)
person Miepje
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! "...it is a testosterone thing" *grin* So, Severus wants to be dominant and in control, and Sky wants to be equals. I wonder how that will work out. ^^ Especially now she's moved into Severus' rooms. I love how she handles Albus btw. And what's with this mysterious Effy? Can't wait to find out! ~Miepje
person misslala
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha that was great! I love how she bests him but doesn't mean to, or does she? She does everything and he can't figure out how. It's great, LOL Oh I can't wait to read more! :)
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, I hate your TBCs! They always come way too soon. I just always want to read more. Like how her magic is different, and what kind of questions Albus will ask the founders. Ok, I will quit whineing now, and just wait patiently for updates to learn all of the answers.
Sansa
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a steamy chapter. Please don't make Severus go back to the dark lord. Make him be happy with what ever she has to show him. The mirror? Hopefully Severus can talk Sky into going back to Hogwarts with him. She needs a bigger social circle than just Severus and some potraits.
Sansa
person misslala
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, at least Sky stands up to him, it's great :)
person misslala
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was just too hot for words, LOL RAWR! *feed the bunny many carrots* Damn I will have to read that again later :P