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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter, please hurry and write the next :d
person misslala
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus is soo damn possesive, although I kinda picture him that way. He gets so testy at everthing. LOL I love it! Hrm, i am going to speculate, she said defeat of VOldemort because she wants to help her father? I know you can't answer, at least, not yet anyway. I hope this doesn't end nearly as sad as Assimilation did!!! OMG. hehe I can't wait to read more!
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a good thing that Sky has led a very sheltered life, because no one else would let anyone speak to them like Severus does to her. I guess as Albus said, "he is still Severus". Albus and Severus better set all the laughing people straight and tell them the founders did teach Sky. Why does Mrs. Black know who Sky is? Was Severus snippy when Sky was talking to Remus just because he doesn't like him, or because he just doesn't like her talking to any other man, or doesn't he want any one to know that she is making his potion? I do look forward to her conversation with Remus.
Sansa
person misslala
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I like it, I like it! I can't wait for more!!! MORE! I am exicted to see how things are progressing and that Sky still has vulnerabilities. :) It's so wonderful. SO how long before she learns what her vows meatna dng ets agnry with Severus? That is what I wanna know...hehe
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh
very
nice
as
always
bravo
bravo
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was. Yes it most certainly was. Nice line - another nice chapter. Snape smooching in the Great Hall though - whatever next!!
person Miepje
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! It has to be legal! *argh* You do like your evil cliffies, don't you? ^^ The wall is really very handy, isn't it?! I hope it will keep Severus safe for a while. Loved it and looking forward to more! ~Miepje
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM

It just has to be leagal! I'll be so sad if it isn't. Stupid Malfoy! I just really despise that man! OK, so he is really really good to look at, but looks only get you so far. Although, I guess if it was declared unlawful, and she was forced to marry Draco, she could always hole up in the wall again. I can't wait for Sky to meet Remus, and see how he reacts to her new potion.
Sansa
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing.. I worked all night I read 18 chapters before work.. then came home and read the rest.. please update soon. I really like this story and I dont generally care for OFC stories.. This is BEYOND AWESOME! :D (Ps-might as well pimp my story lacerations of the soul...its snapey/hermi check it out if'n you like...)
person misslala
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn!! I didn't expect that! :) I always like being thrown for a loop :P Man I love this story! I can't wiat for the the next chapter!