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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...as the two are already suffering...it is better if you can give them a good dumbledore...
BTW, what does Snape want to talk to Harry?
BTW, what does Snape want to talk to Harry?
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9! Hope Draco doesn't get in trouble for hitting Ron!
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute and want more please *hugs tightly*
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Ron is jealous and in a huge currents of emotions, will he do something stupid? Like revenge on Harry?
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should delete the 3 author's notes that make up 3 chapters. they're rather annoying...
and how many versions will this story have? just the 2 or will you make even more?
how did Drao come to the conclusion that Harry left because of what he said? if it was a joke he wouldn't have remembered it well and in Hary's note there was no clue as to why he left so...?
can't wait for what'll happen to Draco and Harry now! (especially in regards to Ron!)
and how many versions will this story have? just the 2 or will you make even more?
how did Drao come to the conclusion that Harry left because of what he said? if it was a joke he wouldn't have remembered it well and in Hary's note there was no clue as to why he left so...?
can't wait for what'll happen to Draco and Harry now! (especially in regards to Ron!)
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's a liiiiiiiiiitle mistake in your story.. and I.. FOUND IT! Yeaah, years of analysing.. naah :P maha, but I will tell you what it is, so hang on, and here it comess! :D
In chapter 2 it says:
Draco slid the hand he had on Harry
In chapter 2 it says:
Draco slid the hand he had on Harry
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... don't get me wrong, because I absolutely LOVE Harry/Draco, but the whole Harry/Severus thing gets my engine runnin', too! Especially when Severus is a (semi) nice guy and has had a thing for Harry for a while. Just... treat them both nicely, okay? I HATE seeing Severus get hurt! (or Harry or Nice!Draco, for that matter!)
Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see where part 1 and part 2 go from here! (I'll be posting this on both stories!)
As for the suggestion on the Part 1 (Harry/Draco), don't make Severus into a bastard... you've already started that with Ron, so instead, maybe have Ron attack Harry and Draco rescues him? And maybe Severus helps Draco get Harry? I don't know, just my humble suggestion!
Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see where part 1 and part 2 go from here! (I'll be posting this on both stories!)
As for the suggestion on the Part 1 (Harry/Draco), don't make Severus into a bastard... you've already started that with Ron, so instead, maybe have Ron attack Harry and Draco rescues him? And maybe Severus helps Draco get Harry? I don't know, just my humble suggestion!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo hope there's a chapter 7!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea that you have now with what Luna said to him. I hope something can come out of it.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no don't do it. harry/snape is all well and good but don't make it a snape raping harry one.... please no snape rape!!!!!!!! I beg you... but aside from that great story so far