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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Yeah for Neville being bigger than Malfoy.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice :)
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK! *shiver* This is the first real Harry/Neville smut fic I've read and all I can say is: DAMN! Whay the Hell aren't there more of these!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I gotta say, as much as I love HPDM I about laughed my ass off over Harry's comments on Draco's size. *grin* It's an amusing change of pace (which is what I was seeking when I looked up HPLB). Brilliant! Please write another one!!! Or make this one longer either way I don't care, just Please More!!!
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell...all I can say...breathing to fast...bloody hell...goodness...hot...oh the dreams...
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! OMG! Please tell me you will write more!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can work a bit on writing technique, because there are random tense changes everywhere; having a beta would help immensely. Other than that, it was really good.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find this a great beginning of a story. I would be very interested if you continued it on into the school year, with Harry and Nev as a pair. I haven't seen that in a story before. I thing you would do a great job with it.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw I've never read Harry/Neville before but I think you got me hooked.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. How great that Neville turns out to be a hot lover.
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, that was FUCKING AWESOME!!! That was my fantasy come true... You're an awesome writer. Please build on this story some more. Maybe add a third person into it have them sneakly watching from afar and then that person gets caught and has to join in. Seriously awesome job. One of the best fanfics I ever read if not the best. THANK YOU!!!!!
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