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for Nevermore

by YamiBakura

person Rae
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that was so sweet. I could totally see that turning into a bit more, like a friendship... I liked it. ^__^ Good job, Omi!

- AkiRae
person Dotowe
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable. I hope you continue with this. It's a wonderful begining!

~Gloria
person ZooArmy
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You can't abandon it as a OneShot! Write more, please. There's definitely potential!
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This can't be a oneshot! You must continue!
person Danine
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet.
person Jess
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! nononononon this is NOT a one shot! Please? Please don't do that to us!! We need more of that! I loved this first chapter and i can see so much future between them!! Pleassssse????/ Hugs! Congratulations by the way.
person EXxTaZzY
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this please tell me you're gonna keep going?? It was awesome and I would love to read mooore =]
person Leenah
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. It's so utterly sweet. If you wanted to this could carry a few extra chapters. But it's also lovely on it's own. Well done for another wonderful fic. Love all your work :)

Leenah
person graballz
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww THIS WAS GREAT! C'mon, you have to at least continue it to a snog or shag AT LEAST!!! This was SUCH a cute beginning (and it just doesn't feel complete yet!)

I was totally yelling at Draco to GET HIS ASS IN THERE AND SAVE HARRY! Well, yelling at him long before he actually made his move, and then I LOVED how sensitive he was!! SUCH POTENTIAL for a beautiful love story! I loved the "Mr. Malfoy, get out of my class. Go see Pomfrey" It just felt so...right! Gotta love Draco!

Please, at least continue it a little?
person Ladynight
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, Hope you add on to it.