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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person pepper
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aawwww...come on :-( please update.. i loved WAWN...and was so happy to read the sequel...(poor draco..always misunderstood XD)..i hope you have the time and the nerve to update this story soon..i'd love to read about the three again:-D
person Liz
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
k;
I read WAWN; and I really loved it. I'm currently loving Paradise Found; and dammit, evil cliffhanger! I just hope Hermione's not a vampire now....
person Caliatara
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I try to write a review for that great story and I hope my english is not as bad as you can't understand my thoughts.
At first I have to say, that I read "What a witch needs" an the first seven chapters of "Paradise Found" in only four days. I think it shows, that your story is realy exiting.
Starting reading the German translation (where 30 chapters are translated at the moment), but I couldn't wait for the next update an so I tried reading it in English ^^
I hope you understand, that I'm not realy able to jude your language, but it was realy good to read. I hate it, if the sentences are so long, that you don't know at the end, what you read at the beginning. And for people, English isn't the foreign language it is even more difficult.
The content is simply great. I'm used to read slash and at the beginning I has some doubts, that a treesomestory and on top with Hermione could be good. But you create a new Harry-Potter-universe and all the plotstrands you bring together make it neary impossible to stop reading. You compose the slash-elements and the hetero-scenes by a way, that nearly every HP-Fanfictionreader enjoy it.
I hope you go on writing soon.

Okay, hoping this little review, how I suspect in horrible English, shows you, what a fantastic story you create.

greetings Caliatara
person Lea
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this story going! The triad is reunited but what about the count, and Blaise and Ginny, and Severus really needing to die, and Merlin trying to escape again!
person Patzi
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey,

i love reading your story and i hope you continue writing soon

yours patzi
person aCharmedOne
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I really like your sequell, please do go on with it soon. I want to know what happens with Hermione and Ginny. Poor Ginny there she meets a nice bloke and than the guy goes and gets possessed.

Be a dear and hurry up with the next chapter. Pretty Please?

Thanks a lot aCharmedOne
person SacredLingerie
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sequel is (dare I say it?) even better than What a Witch Needs. I am thoroughly enjoying it and so excited to read more! Please continue- it is one of the best stories I read on this site.
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more?!?!?! I loved the first one.... dark harry is so hot!
person achilles
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, can't wait for the next installment.

And am I not mistaken that Merlin might be making an appearance?

This might end up being 62 chapters too ;)
person MyGirl
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I love it! *g*
What A Witch Needs is gorgious! I did read the German Translation first, but its not finished yet, so I switched to your original story after chapter 21. And its just great. After it, I dared myself to take a break, but I could stand it for maybe two days and then I had to read Paradise Found. And now, what can I say, poor Hermione! I hope she will be alright. I love the triad, they are just adorable. My three favorite characters together... You do very well, congratulations! I will go on reading, its just breathtaking *lol* Thank you very much!

Love
MyGirl