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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person Kendra
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I luv da story (and yes, I've read 'what a witch needs' - loved it all!) Plz update soon?? Oh, I don't want anything to happen to Blaise!!
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm not sure if I reviewed this chapter yet or not but I figured I'd let you know how excited I am to see more, as always. I've gone back and reread the entire story so far because I just can't get enough of this trio fic. I love everything you've written, great story. please update soon, I'm just so anxious. I check everyday to see if you've posted :) Thanks for all the hard work and great writing...

Obsessed
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
here i sit a month sinse the last update..
Just waiting
nothing more
hopeing you will come to your FREAKING SENSES !!!
UPDATE WITH YOU!!!
UPPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE!!!!
Jeez.
You are driving me insane
due to lack of updates
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
(please?)
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love love love both of your storys. They are truley wicked. amazing. And this one is really getting the blood flow early. And reading both storys in the couse of a few days you can really see how much you have grown as author its amazing. You should really think about if you are not already getting some work published cus you are very very good.

I do have one quibble about you storys and its only tiny believe me. I kinda wish that Hermione was just a tad bit more kick arse. I feel you sort of touch on a issue in WAWN just about how far Hermione would go to prtect her family home. But I still not sure as a reader that is something that has been explained. Also Im not sure what side Hermione kinda of sits on is she light or dark. I know where Draco and Harry are but it would be intresting to know where she stands. I kinda of get the feeling that Hermione wants to be light but deep down is dark. And it would be fun to see that side come out.

Oh I really hope you dont take offensive. I was kinda hopeing that maybe I could plant somemore plot bunnies in your head. and even if it is never explained I know you are gonna take me on one hell of a roller coster ride as a reader.

Bravo its also nice to read a different type of story as well.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update?! Pleeeeeeease?!?!?!?!
person TitaniaElisi
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello petalsoft, I just wanted to tell you that I was absolutly enamoured by your storys the very first time I came to read them!! I first found the translation at fanfiction.de, but very soon I came to the current end of the translation and changed to ther real story - I really LOVE WAWN!!! I raced through the chapters and there is really no better Harry potter fanfiction I
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic fic!!! please update soon cuz I can't wait to know what happens :)
person Gaia
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i'm a reader from your, to german translated What a witch needs...and i find your account on Minnies Fanfictions *grin*
You wrote quite good as a author can do...my english is not that best of all, i know...so excuse, pls.

Your Story in here is that little thing i need to sleep good at night...very delicious and horrably. Greatfull...i don't wonder, that Minnie wants to translate your fictions...they are all good...

So, i want to read more from the triads Storys, please write as fast as you can. I will wait on hot rocks for the new chapter of your story *biggrin*

Greethings from Germany, Gaia

person Anon
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?