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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person darcydearest
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I love it! I was wondering how you were going to be able to wrap this up in one (two) chapter, but you did it brilliantly! I'll admit that I was a little disappointed when the situation with the vampires was revealed as a show, but after it was explained, I can't help but think that it was the perfect end to that adventure. And of course I loved the triad smut. So yummy! That Hermione's a lucky girl. I would love it if you continued (of course) but I completely understand the whole busy-life-outside-the-computer thing. Take your time, and I'm positive that the next thing that you post will be as brilliant and clever as the rest.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Will we ever see the kids?
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Damn its good. I'm going to tell people of this story if they like Draco/Hermione/Harry Pairings. Thanks for writing this story.
person kymmy
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are going to end it here? Noooooo. While I so understand RL and time constraints, I also am self-centered enough to expect you to find the time to continue to amuse me with stories from your WAWN universe. Seriously, not that I'm not serious about the previous statement ;-) , I applaud and appreciate your muse and writing and have thoroughly enjoyed both WAWN and Paradise Found. I hope you have time and desire to continue writing even if they are on one-shot or short story formats. You have just set all this up with so much potential, I hate to see it go to waste. Again, great story.
person MB3
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the story, and no, didn't pick up on the clues of it being a set up. I'm sure they were there, I just probably wasn't being very observant. Anything else your write involving the Marlston's I'll read. Whether it's just a one shot or something longer. I look forward to hopefully reading another piece of writing from you, even if it does take you awhile between updates. I've found that it's worth the wait. Until next time!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. You total had me what a great twist. I had total no idea that was coming. Ohhh you are sneackey. I tottal under stand about findinging hard with time. but i really look forward to any more fics you do in the marlston saga
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!! I can't wait for another story. Keep up the great work!!!!! Post again soon!!!!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been 2 months since the last update, and I'm DYING to read more!!! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE! You're the best, no one writes sexier smut than you! And the character development rocks too! Love you!
person Taklima
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm seriously going mental waiting for the next chapters of this story. Don't let this amazing story become another unfinished project. Please please update soon!
person ty
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, loved what a witch needs and glad to see that you started another story based on that one. cant wait to read more