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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person opy3332
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved both this and WAWN! Would love to see more series if you're up for it!!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

I've found this site really recently and found Paradise Found and your other 62 chapter epic by complete accident.
I loved every single chapter! The way it kept me guessing... plot lines, twists turns and of course the passion in there as well!

Fantastic! Then to add this as well even better!

*bows*

I hope you write some more soon. I enjoyed it all.

~Heir~
person Nicole
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your iedas. If you can, can you let me know when you update. I always read fanfiction and see a few good stories that I want to review. But never really do. THis is ths first one I wannted to review. You write really good stuff. Sometimes when I cant find anything new or good. I reread things and I always reread this @ the top of my list. Nicole
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely thrilled that you and your wonderful mind are back to tell another tail. Please update more often.
P.s I would have loved to be in Draco's position *blushes* -_^

Pps. I did not think that you would make such a plot with the vampires and all. Great work!!!
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed the two fics you've done on the Marlston legacy thus far, and it's wonderful to think you may continue to explore this detailed and highly entertaining AU you've created. Whenever you get around to writing them, we'll be here, waiting to read.
person Genna
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story was a page turner. I went back to the first one to figure out who the characters were before I read this one.

It took me a couple of days to get through each one. For an AU, it was detailed, had its own point of view, and made me believe that most of it was possible.

I missed the Weasleys. I missed the Hermoine that is the smartest witch of her age. Draco was a surprise for me because he was dominant and loved being submissive. I have never read a light/dark Harry fic before so this has been a new experience.

Keep writing in whatever genre appeals to you. I am pretty sure you will have readers.

Genna
person Bonza87
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Petal!

What an epic! For a nine chapter story I feel like I've just finished a full sized WAWN lol. That may very well be because this time I've been here from the start, but who knows :)

I loved it, and unfortunately i can't truthfully say I realised it was a set up, however, the way Harry was treating Demetrius after what happened with Hermione made me think something was a bit suspect, I just couldn't place it. Very well done indeed :)

Can't wait to see some of the background to your triad, but can i make a small request first? please, please, please, finish some of your other wonderful fics :) i wanna know what happens to your other characters!

Regards,

Bonza87
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! I love your Triad! Please do write more stories for them, they are so HOT!
person Mckenzie
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait to read your next one.
person TitaniaElisi
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for havong written this!!!!
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