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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person MrGalion
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here is your mana. Can you go more into detail with the Dark Lord problems and Ministry, I found that very intresting and hope you may enlighten it by writting more about it Please and Thank You for writing.
person jaimelee
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. And man! My muse is saying "split them up! split them up!" (my muse is cruel)... but me thinks that the muse is trying to say "don't make it easy for them... there can be a plot!" I know you hadn't thought of a deeper plot as when you had planned What a Witch Needs. But this story too has its potential to have a deeper plot revloving around the three of them. The triad can be split up... so... fun stuff!

Keep writing. I can't wait to read it.
person kutelilasiangurl
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor draco. and ron is a hypocryte happy that you've added a chappie yay!
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and brilliant chapter loking forward to next update keep up the good work
person mimy
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,the scene was hot and sad. Draco should have left, but Harry is being so mean. I cant wait until the make up.

Congrats
person DarkLady
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww *tear* poor Draco hehe loved this chapter it was great :D Harry finally coming to his senses and ordering Draco home :D
person Kim
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More lots more please. I love your writings.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant follow up hope to read more
person libra595
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, been waiting for the little spin offs for ages, dont keep us waiting long for the next chapters.
person dest
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a pretty good start. the thing i think you could do is describe the pets more. but other then that great start and i am looking forward to the rest of this.