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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person Nina
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EW I would not like any Pansy/Lucius smut. That sounds disgusting.

Anyways, other than that, GREAT chapter!
person darknaja
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No smut between Lucius and Pansy please.... Eurk that's so awkward for me lol, eurk no i can't... But let him as a perfect evil towards her ni
person Lady Darcy
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Luscious Lucius.
*sigh*

I vote for both. Lucius/Pansy smut and him being a total arse to her.
Keep up the great work. I really look forward to your writing.
person DarkLady
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooooo pansy smut ick ick ick ick ick! LOL great chapter :D
person kutelilasiangurl
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad you updated. keep up the good work ALso

schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yay! I loved this story when I found it sometime last year and so now there's a sequel. Even if it is short, it is still as qonderfully writen as the rest. You have me worried about this baranov kid though. and for lucius to invite him to marleston after hed been asking questions..... probably not the smartest route to take. the house elves are going to have some problems with that one.
person Emilliana
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow interesting. It seems like there was coming up a little danger with this Russian boy. I hope he is Russian.. I do not really remember.. but well, you know who I mean...
So can I suppose that this will be a little bit longer fiction than just 5 chapters?
Oh please!
person hahafunnystuff
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great sequel to What a Witch Needs, I really like the plot :D, but please, PLEASE! no pansy smut, I actually shuddered when I read that >.<
person lorien
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo no lucius/pansy...
what's with the count??? you're not tearing our trio apart are you?
get ron out of there. he's annoying and keeps the trio from having lots and lots and lots of fun.

lorien
person Lilum
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you updated!!! *dance of joy*
So...I totally don't think Pansy deserves Lucius'...ahem..."courtesy" But I don't deny it wouldn't be interesting to see what you have our twisted Lucius do to the girl. =P
Don't leave us hanging for TOO long. :)