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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We have arrived at the ball! That was a very interesting chapter. Can't wait for more
person Kermit
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see some Harry/Draco action. Some D/s or BDSM perhaps. I am really enjoying the story. Yes, I agree it's great when you can play with everyone at the same time.
person justcrazyobsessed
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh i'm sooo excited! I can't wait for the make up sex lolol!!!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know you can't see me but I am on my knees right now as I type this. I'm pleading with you to please update soon. I can't take it anymore! I know you can't rush genius, but I'm suffering so bad. Please give me something for the pain.
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!!!!!!!! I most assuredly do NOT see Lucius having a round with Pansy. She is miles beneath him & it's just WAAAAAAAAAY tacky in the sense that you've already presented Pansy & her fetish for "loyalty". I CAN see him whipping the shit out of her & taking pleasure in the torture... but no actuall fucking. That would be in character for all the ones involved...

XD
person Alicia Love
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh the gorgeous triad. i havent been checking this site as often as i should be for new stories and such. ive learned my lesson and im SO GLAD to see the traid back!! .. well .. kinda back. i cringe at the thought of what might happen at the ball. i cant wait for the next update and im checking the site like a million times a day now. *start subliminal* updateupdateupdate *end subliminal*
person DB1
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@3. awww cool story i want more draco, hermione, harry though!!! update soon

*DB*
person Curiosity
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just finished reading WAWN and Paradise Found! I love you writing and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the awsome work. Were all here waiting!
person Bonza87
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH JOY!!!

Sorry about that hehe, but the idea of an additional plot to the WAWN line is thrilling, and i'm already loving the direction it's taking.

It's a shame that Draco can't accept the Weasleys as being friends of his lovers, as it makes him seem aloof to their feelings. But I can understand his feelings, He's just a little bit possesive (and who wouldn't be with such fantastic lovers as he has? haha.)

As for your question about the Pansy/Lucius smut, I'm not a fan of the idea as we haven't seen Pansy prove herself enough to be in Harry's service as yet. And if you want to show Lucius as totally devoted to his Lord then he would feel the same way I suspect.

Trust me when I say that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this wonderful saga. And now that I know how to review properly, I will leave reviews to every chapter I read from here on in :)

As always, your dedicated reader.

Bonza87
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that Harry has wrote to Draco and told him how much he (they) miss him. I think as much as Draco wants Harry to welcome him back he also needs (wants) Harry to punish him for leaving in the first place. Draco needs to be dominated by the dark lord even if he is the man he loves. I wonder if Harry was to truly dominate Draco he would feel more wanted.