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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person Nymphe
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am about to give you the weirdest review ever. There are stories so wonderful, I can get lost in them, have fun reading them, become excited when a new chapter is posted. Then, there are stories so well-written they make me tear up with annoyance because my writing will never be a fraction as good, and I have trouble reviewing them. Your writing definitely falls into the first description and I thank you for that. Whenever I need some motivation for my own tale, to remind me why I started writing in the first place, I read WAWN. And now you have given us a sequel which feels the same way to me, and I must thank you again for that. Keep up the good work!

I see Ginny/Blaise happening for some reason...probably because he seems the best of the four.
person Moit
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stops feet and whines like a child* I want some triad sex! *moans* I love the buildup but gahhhhh. lol It's been too long. I love this story. I wish it would just go on forever.
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay Petalsoft, you're killing me sweety. I have been sooo waiting for Draco to go back to Marlston and now he's there and I just get an interupted masterbation scene, . Just kidding, but seriously, I can't wait for the next chapter, I will be in orgasmic bliss reading about Dark Harry, I can hardly wait, . And what are the Barannovs' up to? I know it will be somthing that will draw Dark Harry out, though. And that alone will be yummy, yummy yummy!!! You are my favorite writer on here so I check your page everyday for new chapters or new stories. I'll be waiting for the update, please don't make me wait too long, I'm terribly impatient. :~{
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to mention, the whole Ghost Snape storyline is brilliant. I didn't see that coming at all. Now please bring on the triad sex, please, please and pretty please.
person evamber
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god ! I can't wait to know what the count baranov is planning... I don't think he means bad, but still I'm wondering what this is all about...xxx
person Pamela Williams
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!! I KNEW it was gonna be the cane!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Brilliant how you wrote the scene where we think that Lucius is gonna take her but instead it's the bent of perception that gives that impression.

Thank God!!!

And LOVE Draco's "I am NOT just a stud/fucktoy, when we have children we will be a FAMILY! And we will teach them LOVE!!" He's so adament on that subject, I love it.

Yeah, Draco needs to be fucked by Harry, very, very deeply... they need some luuuuuuuuurve!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now just what is gonna happen now...

IT'S GOTTA BE LONGER THEN 5 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S JUST GOTTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Ginny now has a dowry... the comment about that opening up prospects otherwise closed to her?

I could almost guess that that sniffing Count dude was gonna make a pass at her or something, as she is the sister of the Dark Lords best friend... staying at Marlston.

This story is BEGGING to slide into deeper depths...

Something is gonna happen, I just know it...

XD
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this continuation! Draco's being a shit! :0) Can't wait for more! Can you let me know when you update?
person Rachel D.
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE your stories, and the