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for Paradise Found

by TCardan

person Donavon
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Abosutely brilliant, but then again you write no other standard.
I am thoroughly enjoying the sequeal as much as the first story.
Go Harry and scare the shit out of them. Your writing is simply
great!

Best wishes, Donavon.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story just as I did the one before but... Hermione's not tougher than that? Really? She's got no wandless skills? She not strong enough to even attemp to fight back? Sorry, its your story- one that I've mentioned I love and certainly will continue to wait on each update- but it seemed that even in the alternate harry potter universe you set up that Hermione would be stronger than that.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! No, no no! Merlin cannot be escaping! No! And Hermione can't die! They have to get the vampires! they have to!! Grrr.... damn you and your cliffies. -.-
person alicia mmhm
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* i wish it took as long to read as it takes for you to update. vampies and dark harry and magical house. oh my. what a fun filled chapater this was. once again with this new chapter you looped together some more little plot holes. for us to get lost in the fall. dear dear hermione. does this make her a vampire now? does this mean the story ends with the death and destruction of the Marlston empire and all within in ...hmm. questions questions. merlin helping snape .. dear god dont let Blaise/Snape see the many house elves. we all know how he enjoyed the elves in WAWN. mmhm, quite a little labyrinth of story line youve got going. whats your next guestimation as to how long this is gonna be now?

oh yeah, must not forget the typical ramblings on how much i hope you update soon. blahblahblah.
person DarkLady
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my gods!! *squeeeeeing* I love dark harry :D *grins* and Draco *swoons* love him even more! heheh I hope they kill severus this time and those pesky vamps too
person Nymphe
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weee! That was fun! Let me guess, Draco is going to become Mordrid again while Harry kicks some vampire butt?
person Melissa
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You certainly are a master of suspense. And you know how to keep your readers begging for more. I still go back reread What a Witch Needs. Excellent work on this latest chapter. I love your plots-- they're so intense and captivating. Please, please update soon. And please have Snape's soul get torn apart somehow. Of course outside of Blaise's body, that would be a terrible body to waste haha. Amazingg story!
person Emilliana
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please let the next chapter come earlier!
It is so exciting that I nearly can't stand it! So please.
I just love this story, and of caurse I love to see Harry dark. I really hope for Harry to find a way to stop the vampires and Snape..
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, was Hermione turned into a vampire? I hope not! Then again that could be fun. Please do us all a big favor and put your life on complete hold and do nothing else but write this story. OK? You don't mind do you?
I can't wait for the next chapter. I guess I'll just have to read WAWN over and over again to easy my pain for the next chapter.
person MrGalion
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
W00t Pzrty time...Uh oh
what's going to happen next.
MAke good torture senes please