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Great second story for the triad in what a which wants. I'm so happy it's a full on plot + smut story with Dramionarry, and not an epilogue with fluff and kids.

Hey, Where can I find "What a Witch Needs"?

(Ron closed his eyes and moaned as her lips enveloped his cock with hot, wet, heat.

For the most part, I enjoyed this story... however, I'm not so impressed with Harry's and Hermione's actions. If I were Draco, all they would have succeeded in doing was pushing me further away. That's not to say Draco avoiding them was all that smart either, but I can sympathise with him, I don't like Ronald Weasley either. And I'm sure his feelings of being pushed aside weren't helped at all by Harry nor Hermione, who I'm sure were spending plenty of time with the Weasleys without a thought to how it made Draco feel. Of course, I don't understand why Draco would wait for so long to return after receiving Harry's letter... basically him admitting to wanting Draco to return. (Yes, I'm aware Draco said "pride" in his head... but if his need for the other two was enough to overcome his feelings that the end of the whole ordeal and allow for sex, I'm a little confused as to why his need for them wouldn't overcome his pride.)

I have a few questions, though. In WaWN there were apparently withdrawal symptoms when they left Marlston, how come Draco didn't seem to suffer these this time around? Regarding Bunny/Tiger... I can see sending a female, because at least Hermione can partake, but Tiger's a male... and none of the triad will touch him... which leaves him for guests, or possibly other pets, and by Hermione's rules, only if they want to.

Has Mordred possessed anyone of the other Marlston triads? Or is Draco just 'lucky'? When Draco became possessed, Harry would have lost his powers, ya? So... wouldn't Harry have shown some sort of worry for Draco after he returned from capturing the vampires, powerless? Even if he wasn't worried for Hermione?

I hope Hermione's learned not to open Marlston up to the general public by now, how many times does the way to Merlin have to become breached for her to grow a little more paranoid?

Also, if Hermione wasn't as bad off as she appeared to be, why didn't she listen to Draco, and released Those That Dwell Below? I was going to ask why she didn't just ask them not to harass her guests in the first place, but then realized that if they were out at all, they would have stopped her from being bitten.

I think that's all for this one.

--Sam

good story darco is hurt becouse he is afraid that ron will take his lover away.. ron is hurt becosue darcco is taking his friend away, and afreaid that they will stop being friend with ron to make darco happy

wow! i loved it, and no i never guessed that the whole scenario was a setup...lol. i love triad fanfics, your body of work is quite impressive.

This is a really good story. I love it. I'm really glad you kept going after What a Witch Needs. It was a good ending but I'm enjoying the post story as well. Keep it up. You're an amazing writer =]

My god you keep the excitement on so amazingly well!!!!!!! i keep fidgeting in my room, your smut is not just smut the plot in it is just.... unbearable, I can't stop reading and grow with ... what is it ... nervousness? Anticipation?.. My god ... I can't believe you!
YOU ROCK! YOU SOOOO ROCK...

Off to continue in chp2 at the moment ... oh boy what will Draco do?!... *squeals*


Finished now... Wow... it truly was an incredible story I will love to read the few stories u have written on this plot, I hope you wrote some by now, I

moar plz?
sorry, i go lolcat when i get excited... but still, more triad would make me very pleased. i was not a fan of slash previously, but slash with the other parts does quite nicely. i look forward to everything you post.

Som

Thank you so much for continuing this story. I've read WAWN too many times to count and having this extra made me so happy. Thank you. Thank you! THANK YOU!!!