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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I liked it alot. Good job.
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrrreat story. Loving it so much. Please add more, I want to know what happens next!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please edit the last chapter, delete those spaces in between, because they're very annoying, it draws the attention away from the story
I do like your story :)
I do like your story :)
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was just simply HOT. chapter two please
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Punctuation would help a lot. Empty lines between paragraphs would also be good. It was sweet when Hermione bolted from the room after Blaise tried to go up her shirt.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was absolutely hot. However, you may want to see about getting a beta. It is hard to follow along with your line of thought when you have four sentences running together. Using commas and periods properly will help. Hope to see the next chapter up soon. Awesome story line.