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for Master Me

by Vergnugen

person Vittani
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey ill have a go at drawing but i wont send you it unless i think its good (i'm self conscious). Please update this again though, its so hot. I really need more. I'm as adicted as Draco is!
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dont even think about not continuing this fic *begs*. this chapter definatley met the standards (and went beyond). just dont leave the fic. its too good. it has just the perfect amount of suspense to keep the reader on the edge of his/her seat (and not to mentioned all hot and bothered...mmmm).

although, the way harry writes his letters seems a little odd. his writing is a little too eloquent for harry. but thats just my thought.

anyway, excellent job, cheers
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Moremoremoremoremore! Pleeease?! There are so few truly insightful D/s stories out there... I'd really like to see Draco find his "Slave."
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When will Harry reveal himself? Or is he truly waiting for Draco to find him? What was the Gryffindor package? Who sent it? Must have chapter 3!
person Danine
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delicious! I cannot wait for more!
person Annie
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! I'm glad you decided to continue because I would really like to see how Draco can..er..:cough: "fulfill" the fantasy of this *mysterious* slave..but we all know who it is ;) Lovely job!!
person Mitamay
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please, PLEASE write more! The letters to Draco are too hot! EM
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!
I do hope you write more.
Loved it.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more. more more more more.... now?
person Vittani
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my god, i think you definitely hav to update this. Please.