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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another gorgeous story! right, I had to admit that when McGonagall reveals Hermione had told her about being turned on by Snape I fell out of my chair laughing, just imagining the whole ordeal. can't wait for more! good job!
ophelia
ophelia
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please. can't wait to see how you continue the story. keep up the good work. update soon please.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love it! I love it! I really love your stories, you are one of my favorite authors! I thought that the dancing and the rain were very nice touches in this story! Please update!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how they go for it, even in the middle of a rain storm. But after three year it would be a shame if they were interrupted. After all Hermione is gone in the rain, someone will be looking for her.
Wonder what hey would think if they caught her in the act with Dumbledore
Wonder what hey would think if they caught her in the act with Dumbledore
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realize this is picky, but the woman puts her hand on the man's shoulder, not on his waist. He places his hand on her waist or back, depending on how closely he holds her. If she is very much shorter than he, it is permissable to rest her hand on his arm or even his chest (although flicking the nipple is frowned on).
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful first chapter! Great style too. I do realise that you want to write PWP but I think plot would only improve the story. Keep going!
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far,,i hope you continue to write more and soon..keep up the good work.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One: So do I have this correctly? That this story will be only wall-to-wall smut with Hermione Granger and Severus Snape? I have no objections to that. None at all!
You said she'd never told anyone about her feelings for Snape - I'm assuming you didn't count McGonagall whom she ran to nearly instantly saying Snape turned her on.
I detect a teensy bit of plot in the news that Snape is McGonagall's nephew. You'd better stomp on that insidious information before it turns into a full-blown issue and makes your story actually have a real plot. This is just an alert. I think you tend to weave ideas into your stories almost by magic, and a mindless PWP will sprout into a real story before you know what hit you. Watch out!! 8-)
Three years later (are we past the Voldemort Era? Is he only a memory now?) she's moping about Snape again. Or I should say, still. Alrighty, then. Bring on the PWP. Smut pie, yummy. Lemon Meringue, I hope.
Good start. I wonder who's going to get into who's knickers first?
You said she'd never told anyone about her feelings for Snape - I'm assuming you didn't count McGonagall whom she ran to nearly instantly saying Snape turned her on.
I detect a teensy bit of plot in the news that Snape is McGonagall's nephew. You'd better stomp on that insidious information before it turns into a full-blown issue and makes your story actually have a real plot. This is just an alert. I think you tend to weave ideas into your stories almost by magic, and a mindless PWP will sprout into a real story before you know what hit you. Watch out!! 8-)
Three years later (are we past the Voldemort Era? Is he only a memory now?) she's moping about Snape again. Or I should say, still. Alrighty, then. Bring on the PWP. Smut pie, yummy. Lemon Meringue, I hope.
Good start. I wonder who's going to get into who's knickers first?