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by ccino49

schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm .... Severus in a lions' den?
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, so exactly what is this woman? Makes me think of that beautiful black panther in the video. Is that her anamangus? The golden eyes make me think of an animal. (It also makes me think of Perrin from the Wheel of Time with his golden wolf eyes. Have you read any of those books?) If anyone can handle her, I am sure it is Severus. I'm sure Remus has nothing to be worried about. I like the not quite freinds concept. I also love the mental picture of Severus in cowboy boots. I'm going to picture the black jeans as wranglers too. As the saying goes. wrangler butts drive girls nuts! Pitt will appreciate these last couple of comments. Can't wait to read your last chapter to see how Severus handles the man eater.
person Miepje
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus; in the clutches of that sexy Kat. Must be torture for him (I think not *grin*).
Sounds like she's some kind of succubus ^^ She better not gobble him up completely!

A fun read so far. Can't wait to see the next chapter! ~Miepje