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for Defamation of Character

by Looneyluna

schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Go Hermione!
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person DarkFaith
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dammit!
I was getting into this!
Write more now!

Please?
person LauraK
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I think it's better than the original. Good luck with your surgery and I hope you're able to do one-handed updates. : -) LK
person lipasnape
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like these new developments. I really really hope that after all this Hermione will not fall for Snape's body as easily as she did in your previous version. He deserves to sweat and try hard to get any time of any kind with her after all this. I guess you will have to work out some kond of happy ending for Percy, too, but I cannot imagine the situation where I would be OK with it. Have you perhaps overdone it again? Do we need a third version? I can't imagine Hermione agreeing to anything with Snape, neither sex nor love. Oh, well.
Good luck with your surgery.
person snapeluva
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this version of the story much better than the other one! Good luck on your surgery and keep up the good work...I can't wait for Hermione's revenge!!
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, foiled in chapter 5. I figured Ginny would come and rescue Hermione. How were her assets frozen?

I was scared to read chapter 4 because of the injunction plotline, but Percy and Snape are just being bad, naughty people. I can't wait for Snape to get his comeuppance! At this point I don't think I want Snape and Hermione to get together!
person Queen Celestia
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was too short!

I hope your surgery goes well !
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.


person Carine
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Looneyluna,
I loved your first version of the story,but your second try ist just sooooo muuuuch better,I teally loughed about your "floo-lag".
I think this version is much more believable than the first one and that Severus is more in character.Just keep on going like this.

I hope that your surgery went well.:)