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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Cannot wait for the next chapter! What interesting characters you have created. And the story has not been predictable, which I love also!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14: The dreaded writer
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: Apparently the advice Albus and Minerva gave Severus was off center a bit. It probably was good he didn't rush after her while he was angry, but waiting six months to come forward in any way but through his purple prose seems to have made his attempt at reconciliation more difficult.
I do hope Severus manages to win his way through Hermione's anger to her heart and they finally get past all the misunderstandings. Was Severus the troll in his manuscript chapters? Hermione certainly isn't perfect, but is that the way Severus sees her? That won't work for them either, but I think he really doesn't see her as without flaw.
I'll wait as patiently as I can (that's, uh, not much) for the ultimate chapter and hope it's a happy ending. 8-)
I do hope Severus manages to win his way through Hermione's anger to her heart and they finally get past all the misunderstandings. Was Severus the troll in his manuscript chapters? Hermione certainly isn't perfect, but is that the way Severus sees her? That won't work for them either, but I think he really doesn't see her as without flaw.
I'll wait as patiently as I can (that's, uh, not much) for the ultimate chapter and hope it's a happy ending. 8-)
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Snape being dosed by love potion... now, that's something! =]
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank Goodness! A fanfiction writer has returned to the norm. The last week has seemed like a desert to readers!
Ch. 13 - Does Hermione ever come to the conclusion that 'real life' is not like a romance novel? That she fell in love with Severus as he was and needs to accept the fact that he is not the great romance novel hero. He's making an effort, that should count big time.
Ch. 13 - Does Hermione ever come to the conclusion that 'real life' is not like a romance novel? That she fell in love with Severus as he was and needs to accept the fact that he is not the great romance novel hero. He's making an effort, that should count big time.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually very cautious of the pairing of Snape and Hermione but this one looked to interesting to pass up. I have to say, I'm not disappointed that I read it. Some of your language was a bit caustic 'arse' 'snog' and 'bum' I'm reffering to but otherwise it was amazingly well written. From your language I'm guessing your English or Irish and it's nice to read things in familiar English. That may sound strange but American's just write things...differently. Who knows, maybe I'm crazy :P I really did enjoy this and look forward to more of your work.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, I haven't been this much into a fanfiction in a long time. You've got me on pins and needles!!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extraneous Information: Actually, I think "Andy" just above has it backwards. Your sentence is correct as you wrote it.
"He'd never been any good at interpersonal relationships."
"He'd never been any good at interpersonal relationships."