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for Defamation of Character

by Looneyluna

person Jen618
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done on finishing! Great stuff. JF
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Breakfast scene: 'I
person Jen618
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tee hee. Nice ending to that bit. I'm glad her muse is co-operating, it was beginning to worry me! LOL Well done!
person dsm2007
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next! I have a lingering thought in my mind: will the Harry/Ginny book bring the two back together? ^.^" I can't wait to find out.
person jbt
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if i were severus, i wouldn't even like hermione anymore. i don't like her anymore. she's shrill and silly and gods, can we say, DUH! it's not funny anymore and i don't even care if the couple gets together at this point.
person Ryu
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not again! Every chapter they find a way to muck it up. Get together already!!!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo, good for Jen! That's what we need, someone to whip the authors into action. The Story - this chapter was actually sad. Hermione's lack of trust [with good reason] and immature belief that people are what they seem to be on the surface, and Severus' frustrations with the whole thing. I appreciate Hermione's reaction to him. After having one's trust betrayed it is EXTREMELY difficult to get over it... which he probably knows as his own trust levels are not the best. Good chapter;)
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I hate it when you end the chapter like this, please update again soon.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing. I want another chapter pronto lady :D You write so eloquently, and while i know some of that rests on your very apt beta's the plot and the story is all you! I love that the snarky Severus that we've always known is now grown into a full fledged character with real emotions. He is in love, desperately with a witch that has decided somewhere in her engorged brain that he does not want her. It may take ages to win this out. I would read every chapter!
person Marti
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're feeling better, and thanks for a great new chapter!

Marti