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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! I love it!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't care about the amount of chest hair Severus has or not all I am saying that was a bloody brilliant chapter and i enjoyed reading it sooooo looking forward to next update. Make it quick please LOL
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. Great job.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch.5 - Wow! your description and the the flow of this chapter is really engrossing. I was practically panting by the end of it. Nice job!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh good!
Sparks will fly when she realises the truth, I have a feeling Snape won't tolerate being Simon much longer!
Carry On Snape!
Sparks will fly when she realises the truth, I have a feeling Snape won't tolerate being Simon much longer!
Carry On Snape!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate to point out flaws, but it was continuous, so thought I'd bring it to your attention. Hermione seems to be a quick-change artist in this chapter. These are the sentences, presented in the order you have them in Ch. 5.
Tugging her nightgown into place, Hermione sat up and looked around.
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She knew he had no shirt on because she had felt the heat of his bare chest through the thin cotton of her pajamas.
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Tugging her nightgown into place, Hermione sat up and looked around.
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She knew he had no shirt on because she had felt the heat of his bare chest through the thin cotton of her pajamas.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's very well written and entertaining. My only reservation is how dulled her senses are with the potions he's giving her. In the beginning it was starting to sound like a date-rape drug. I hope that is not the case now.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, yet again! LOVED IT! :)
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods!!! This is marvellous. Can't wait to read more.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating plot device! It gives Snape the chance to reak his revenge, which I think should be very interesting. Wouldn't it be funny if, in the end, it is Hermione who has the last laugh.
Your romance novel excerpts are great satire. I especially loved Snape's reaction to them in the first chapter...great comedy, that!
I look forward to reading the rest of this story.
Blessings,
Elizabeth
Your romance novel excerpts are great satire. I especially loved Snape's reaction to them in the first chapter...great comedy, that!
I look forward to reading the rest of this story.
Blessings,
Elizabeth