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I do like this way better. I look forward to where it goes from here.
Sansa

I'm glad you decided to take it in a new direction. I was slightly worried about the twist it had taken in the last few chapters. Keep up the good work.

I have to say, I am rather disappointed as well. The original story was going great and I can't say I really feel like reading the 'same thing' again.

I quit.

Not that I want you to be unhappy, but I'm pretty bummed about the termination of the original storyline. I really, really liked the Memento-esque struggle--how she had to take headache potions everyday and all. It's not precisely a romantic comedy, certainly, but the darkness was very appealing, and we were getting to see all sorts of facets of both Hermione and Snape. Snape is being punished and knows his own guilt well, and he won't get off the hook with anyone all that easily.

I'm confused about why Snape would get control of both the profits and all of Hermione's other holdings. Wouldn't the ministry just snatch everything and hold it in limbo until the situation is resolved? I liked that she assumed Snape was Fred or George. Fred and George have stocky silhouettes, so she should have known immediately that the person didn't look like Fred or George though.

I like it. Please update soon.

Soooooooooo disappointed!!! I waited and waited for the next chapter. I am not saying this is bad, but I don't see what was so wrong with the way it was written before. The original story was more to your style. I saw nothing different from what was happening in the original story then your others, example: unforgettable.

SOOOOOOOOOO DISAPPOINTED

But I will bitterly keep reading and try to satisfy my need for the original story with my own imagination :(

I. Love. This. Fic. There are very few fics that seem to capture the essence of Severus Snape's personality, but I think you've come pretty close. You have an amazing sense of humor and I laughed outright in many places. Please do continue with this fic.

Poor Sev, having to journal! This will be fun.

Darque Hart, blame me! If you had to read my long and involved comments and suggestions -- well, the poor author doesn't stand a chance.

This was a great chapter! Maybe even the best one yet. I hope you're able to keep up with your posting schedule but if not I'm sure it will be worth the wait.