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honestly, snape poisoning hermione and having/forcing nonconsensual sex WAS very snapeish, not to mention slytherin to the core. the new version is certainly in character, but i dont think your first plotline and characterization were wildly OOC. the world is not a nice place and bad things happen; not all fanfiction is clean and sweet.

i like where you are going with this, keep writing. im interested to see how this building war of revenge between snape and hermione breaks into love (or at least lemons).

I hope your surgery goes well, with a speedy recovery. I loved the last chapter and hope I will see a new one as soon as possible. I hope your recovery will be quick and uneventful. Good luck, Carla

loved it please update soon i can not wait to see what hermione writes

Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Although I'd be very interested to read the original, judging by some of these comments. And I admire you for having the guts to rewrite...if it were me, I'd have abandoned it if it weren't going my way (and I've done that more than a few times).

Write more soon! I'm hooked!

I never got into the first round of the story, so I'm quite enjoying the second round. Its a nice break from my writing of my story which is.. .not really funny at all gah. ! I never realized how draining writing serious situations can be x.x

I like it. Please update soon.

i love the story. the plot is really good! i can't wait for the next chapter. one question/comment though; in this chapter snape thinks about how he like her style of writing the sex scenes, but in the first chapter he mentions how horrid it is. that might be accounted for by his extreme drunkenness. but still, though i'd mention it.

hope you write more soon - tasha

Severus is so funny in the first chapter! The whole "maybe he should eat some dinner" line had me laughing so hard

Oh, you might want to mention that you're re-writing and not re-editing in the summary.

Hey, hon. I totally understand why you did what you did, and I can only hope your readers will appreciate the guts it took to re-model the story. The alternative, of course, would have been pulling the story entirely and not finishing -- much worse, from my pov. I love this new plot line; and yes the old one was interesting in terms of the headache potion and the forgetting and the puzzle of the whole thing (I liked the puzzle aspect), but there was that other issue which was... uncomfortable. Kudos to you. I'm pleased we have an exciting 'new' fic rather than none at all.