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The smut in this story is definitely hot. The only problem I have, as a HG/SS fan, is that this is actually a Snape/multiple fic and probably should be categorized under threesome/moresomes. Even if it does eventually have sex with HG, he's had it with almost every other female in the house. Unless HG is just in it for the hot sex like all the other girls (or despite it as the case may be), why would she want sloppy fifths? With that line of thinking, I was wondering if this story is going to go the relationship route whereby Snape'll develop feelings for Hermione (and visaversa) or if this is just going to be an PWP orgy fic. Both are fine, IMO. I just think it should be categorized correctly what ever direction you go with it.

i just loved this chapter can't wait to see who is next, maybe Fleur, are you leaving the best for last I wonder. Brilliant story loking forward to the next chapter

brilliant chapter enjoyed reading it hope to read the next update soon, can't help wondering who is next to visit.

Ack! Wonderful!!!!
You are a master!
Minerva sure is the feistey one, and their past makes all kinds of sense. I'd beat his ass, too. I wonder how he told her/convinced her that he wasn't evil and it was under Dumbledore's orders. Or was it? Ah well. It doesn't matter, this is just the appetiser of the real relationship to come.
Very bittersweet and very smart. Love how he used Ginny's words to get a kiss, and how Minerva stayed true to how you depicted her in the bedroom through it.
SO! That leaves Tonks, Fleur, and Hermione.
Are you planning on giving poor Severus a rest or is he going to "do" them all in one night?
AH! I can't wait till you update!
Thanks ever so for your reply.

-Gwyn

Please update soon. I like it.

not bad, but AGH..I don't know if I'll ever be able to scrub the image of McGonagall and Snape out of my head. O_o

other than that, I'm really looking forward to some Snape/Hermione smut!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Awww... that was so sweet!!!! Please oh please write more! I await your update with bated breath! I use way too many exclamation points!
Your style is exquisite and your approach unique and refreshing. I love the imagery you invoke. I never would have seen Minerva in the light that you showed her, but you made it work. Is he going to have more late-night visits from the other girls? May I request that Fleur stay the hell out of it? She's about to be married, so it makes me uncomfortable. That and I can't imagine how Bill could be shown up by Snape, they both have the same bad-boy appeal, but Bill is younger. Maybe a lemon between the two of them (Bill and Fleur)?
I am looking forward to how Hermione fits into all of it and ends up with Snape. But if he's to do any more with other girls, save 'Mione for last. (Please)
Aw what the hell, you're a genius so you do what you want with it. I'm sure you'll make me love it no matter what.
-Gwyn

P.S. you actually got me to laugh with all the pillow antics. I also screamed when you cliffied at Ginny's hand on Severus's shoulder. Well, more like squeaked.
Update soon!!!

I can't believe no one has commented before me. I laughed so hard I stirred up my asthma! Don't worry, I'm ok. Boy would I love to get involved in something like that myself. **sigh** You had better finish this! Thank you for a hell of a laugh, I really needed it. 8D Apryl

I am in awe.
You had me laughing through the best part of the story and I actually got nervous when Molly came up.
Then the quick get-away from Severus, the "so-called" sleepy Charlie in the hallway.
It is too good.
Way to go.
One question though, if this is a Severus/Hermione story, how come Ginny is in sevvie's room?