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for Pillow Fight

by CryingCinderella

schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great just great, but can't wait to see more of it real soon I hope. You're readers are hungry and need more to read to keep them happy and fed in fiction. Update soon please !!!
person andy
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi. I LOVE your story. there definately are a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but a different plot line from what I've previously read. i hope to see an update soon.
Andy
person because
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you. I was so happy to see another chapter I actually did a little happy dance. Wow that had to have been the most embarressing conversation ever, I loved it. Two statements that stand our are Hermione calling Severus a random man whore (I may actually use this one in real life - priceless) and Albus blandly asking "Who was naked?" LMAO!!!
I know what you mean by finding the characters direction difficult. The first chapter was so much fun (have re-read it around 10 or so times) but where do you go from there?
Thank you also for the comment at the start of the chapter, I was hoping you took note of your reviews. Now what can I give you to get you to write more for "Autumn Argument"? Hee Hee.
I absolutely love this story. I love a snarky but loving Snape. I really love how you write the small things in this story, the way he looks at her, holds her, the sound of the sheets when he reaches for her, perfect. Look forward to more from you, happy writing.
person Damiana
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Fun story and lovely lemons. :)

I think that there may be a bit of confusion due to chapter 9 as it is... The following line breaks continuity: "Ginny fell silent. She hadn
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. please please more .. later for now

angel
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, very interesting chapter, looking forward to seeing how things go now. :D
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update been looking forward to it, great chapter looking forward to the next one
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You updated. Thank you. I love this fic!!!
person Apryl
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I laughed my ass off. This update was well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what's next.
person DB1
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9 lol awesome chapter, update soon

*DB*