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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got a good plot, but I don't find the story all that realistic since Harry is accepting everything so fast. It's like 'yo snape's your dad' oh really? but he hated me? 'no he doesn't' okay than I won't hate him anymore either, now everything is fine and dandy yaaay ^.^. and 'oh Hermionie is having sex with my dad, even though she is my best friend and he is 2 times as old as he is, but my sudden dad is happy so it doesn't matter!.' and 'Oh Draco is soo hot but I hate him so I won't try to seduce him, but oh wait! he's apologizing! well now I won't hate him anymore and call him my boyfriend after 1 date!. ^^
I don't mean to flame you, so I apologize if you think I am, but I really think that if you want to make this a great story, you should make it a littlee more slow paced..
I don't mean to flame you, so I apologize if you think I am, but I really think that if you want to make this a great story, you should make it a littlee more slow paced..
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so addorable...*squells* keep writing
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was wonderful! I can't wait for ch 6!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*smile* Love the father/son talk! S000 need chapter 7!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, very interesting. I like it. I really hope you chose to continue and explain what is up with Hermione. Besides... we really need that beautiful Slytherin very soon. ^_^
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more more!!!! please tell me that there is going to be more of this story!! update soon please!!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! They're going on a date!!!!!!!*squells* how cute!!! Update soon!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 3! What is Harry's decision?
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice begining...i like it. Can't wait to see what happens. *looks nervous* you arint going to make anything bad happen are you? *whimpers* I hope not. Keep writing please.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Please update soon.