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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
May I sujest you get a beta reader? Clean your story up, repost it, and then I'll read it.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! *ROTFLMFAO* Sirius in this chapter cracked me up...I'm suprised you didnt have him faint...That would have been hilarious....keep writing I want to know what happens next...
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. Remus should of smack Sirius across the head for yelling. Please update soon.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 13! Surely Harry wouldn't have an abortion? What will he do?
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I can't believe it...I thought Snape would have cute Draco's balls off for geting Harry pregnant...O.O OHHHHHH whats Draco's dad going to do? OMG, cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 14! Lucius is a spy for the Order. Not out of character. Draco in the books seemed to adore his father. Maybe behind the public scenes Lucius is a loving father.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
liked that sirius was the one who blew up at him seems right some how
overall a pretty good story
overall a pretty good story
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BETA? Hmmmm? Well i would like to offer my services as one. I enjoy it and it actually does help me with m own stories. Just email me if I meet your standards. My email is Akitosgoddess429@comcast.net.
Ja ne
Kireania
ps. I just realized that I forgot to mention that I liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Poor Harry feeling sick. Well keep up the interesting story.
Ja ne
Kireania
ps. I just realized that I forgot to mention that I liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Poor Harry feeling sick. Well keep up the interesting story.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter but short
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye