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for Touching the Untouchable

by graballz

person NightLo
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Harry ever return to Gryffindor's tower soon? Or would he stay in another room after this - you know, though we would love sharing a room between the two, adults would not allow it! Also will Seamus, Neville and others find out?
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

I'm still here - and I still like it!! I loved that you mentioned Samayel at the end... chapter 65 is no less abrupt or traumatizing! T__T At least I have this to come back to for mental repairs. ^_~
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8! Harry's memories are still in the pensieve.
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've always wondered that myself. Is it a copy or the actual memory? Sooo need chapter 9!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6

*dances* YAY! Updates! I love updates. Especially when nothing's been updated in DAYS, and I'm going out of my mind with boredom for the lack of fics. I was so glad when Draco found him! I can only imagine what Ron and Hermione will do. I kinda think that maybe Harry should have been taken to the hospital wing all bloody and cut up, just for the shock factor - see, he didn't mean it, when he found out what he'd done, look what he did, sort of thing. Speaking of imagining, I won't have to because you're updating again soon, yes? Write, write write! It's all I ever seem to do these days XD One day, I'll bust out with a massive fic of epic proportions, and finally build a fanbase.

I'm rambling XD but I have an excuse - I'm exhausted >__< Still, this is a review. So... reviews... hm.. I really loved the portrayal of Hedwig. LOVED it. ^__^ Thanks for the update!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need ch 6! He can't die!!!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

One day delays are nothing. But the sooner the better ^_~ I really REALLLLY love how this is turning out!
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 (End)

Wow. What an intense chapter. POOR HARRY!!! Please update this again soon! I'd love to know how he's reacting to what Ron said/did to him in front of the entirety of Hogwarts staff and students.
person Kay_Rage
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how do you write about something u never read or saw. especially something based on a book.
person Danine
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh why haven't you read the books!?! They are delightful!

Neville is a timid, awkward boy, but will certainly stand up for what he thinks is right when it comes down to it. He doesn't really stand up for himself though. It could fit that he'd take on a roll like this if Ron showed him great interest, and I'm certain he'd do the job as well as he could, if only for the delightment of being thought that he could do it. Does that make sense? Sorry, probably not.

Anyhow, don't worry too much about your British slang. You'll always get some offhanded remark for some "English" person who shouts "CANON" at you, but as long as Draco isn't shouting "Fucking-A, dude!" then you have little to worry about. There's a nice site on british slang terms if you want to pick up a few new ones, but basically keeping conversation english, from any country, no one is going to care whether your British or not. Basically all of the writers aren't anyways, so keep that in mind. I only know a handful that are, and they could give a shit whether I said something right or wrong.

Oh! And another awesome chapter! Read the damned books! You're missing out! ;)