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for Touching the Untouchable

by graballz

person NightLo
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...first of all, just thanks for your praise! Since I will be quite busy with work till Friday, just let me quickly R&R.

Now Snape knows, sure he is going to do something, like informing Dumbledore and others, or even cooperate with Harry (though I say not sooner but later when threat is present)...but I must admit - if this is the case, interesting scene is assure...

Still I have my doubt - well actually Harry is absent in Gryffindor and all his classes with others like Seamus, Dean and especially Neville & Ginny - they must be very curious and try to find out, as they are friends...I am just wondering what have they done / what will they do? How will Ron, Hermione and Harry react to them.

For Ron, actually this is expected, as Ron is always jealous of Harry (as clearly shown in Book 4 when Harry was announced as one of the candidates) - and Ron is always true to Harry, maybe even suspious of Harry's intention on Hermione, so Ron's outburst is right. But I am just wondering, Ginny is the closest Wealsey to Ron, will she talk him out? Will Ginny still harbout feeling for Harry? Also with such a traumatic event, sure Hagrid will notice, what has he done? Or will Hagrid be there?

BTW, I have a good suggestion, As Cissa is planning revenge on Draco as well as Harry, if ever, just IF, she finds out the love between the two, then she can kill two birds with one stone...and this may mean something to Draco...

Lastly, let me wait for coming chapter, as 2 ex-friends seem to find an unexpected way to reach each other...what will Harry do?
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all the chapters I have somehow missed. This is so good, very interesting, grabbing plot line, personal interactions are spot on, and the sex is sprinkled in in just the right amount. You have done Ron expecially well, he is so often very flat and predictable in other fics. Draco and Harry are just perfect, I imagine that helping Draco will help Harry over his own problems. Heaven help us when Ron finds about THAT. Of course, am begging for more, but know how real life can be.... speaking of which, off to work with me, probably late as it is. Thanks for a great ride so far!
person Danine
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely! You're scared for Draco too? He's doomed! Wonderful chapter here, it as nice seeing Albus pop in with his wise-self to straight out the hothead. Ron gets into a fight with someone (either Harry or Hermione) every book and holds a grudge out a lot longer than he should, so this isn't a stretch by any means. I love your writing style, can't wait until the next chapter comes out and I FIND OUT ABOUT DRACO!
person NightLo
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...finally found out some time to read 2 chapters at one time...that explains why Draco is so worried - since Draco loves his mother, that makes things vulnerable...and if Harry insists to go with him - that doubles the worries! Will this happen?

And will Snape find this out? Actually if Draco needs to go back, school must be informed and Snape must find out, will he warn Draco for this. As Snape might have a better understanding of Cissa, will there be any precautionary measures?

Lastly - does Remus and Tonks know about Harry's attempted suicide?
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 11! Now I'm really worried! Narcissa wants revenge on Draco and Harry! Hermione can't forgive Harry though she hopes she can in the future? Must have more!
person Danine
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Don't go home, Draco! I'm on the edge of my seat here, babe! What's going to happen? Ooh, i'm so excited to find out!
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i found you, i found you, I BLOODY FOUND YOU!!! I forgot the name of the story and i forgot to bookmark and omg im sooo glad i found you!! ok im done. now hurry up and POST again :) Oh yeah, AND DONT GO HOME DRACO!
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why is Draco worried? Need chapter 10!
person Danine
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nice chapter! Very sexy :) So Draco's going home for a bit? Eep!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter... uh... the latest one. XDD

Why would I leave? I love this! I was so excited when I saw it had been updated. ^___^ I think it's chapter nine? >_O Brain is broken. >__<